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    Who are you...

    I often wonder who you are
    when youíre not killing me ....


    She looked in the mirror
    and said I break my own
    heart every night.


    I made this with another writer.

    Last edited by Jk_Sl; January 22nd, 2021 at 11:25 PM.

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    I would highly recommend to consider your other two poems, add this in and then work through all three to form one great poem.
    Craft / Draft / Graft And Write To Entertain.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheMightyAz View Post
    I would highly recommend to consider your other two poems, add this in and then work through all three to form one great poem.
    Hi,

    Thank you Iíve only just noticed your reply.
    This was made with another writer.
    I will take your advice on board , thank you.

    J.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheMightyAz View Post
    I would highly recommend to consider your other two poems, add this in and then work through all three to form one great poem.
    Hi,

    Iíd had another thought earlier.
    When this poem was made, the bottom half was actually a comment to the writerís poem.
    It felt so personal and every time I read it back it has a deeper meaning.
    I think I will keep it as it is, I had thought she meant who are you is her partner , but my comment made it that she was talking about herself.

    J.

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