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  1. September 12th, 2020, 05:57 PM #1
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    I am atttempting to write a haibun but want to use senryu instead of haiku. All the sites I reference only mention haiku.... thoughts?
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  2. September 12th, 2020, 09:47 PM #2
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    haiku is an umbrella term-- writing senryu in haibun is the same as writing haiku with a different emphasis. I have a haibun half haiku and half senryu
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  3. September 13th, 2020, 08:16 AM #3
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    Quote Originally Posted by rcallaci View Post
    haiku is an umbrella term-- writing senryu in haibun is the same as writing haiku with a different emphasis.
    ah, now I understand. I'd always assumed they were different animals. The only difference is topic.
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  4. October 10th, 2020, 04:33 PM #4
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    Hey PiP still waiting on that haibun-
    Nature weeps, the devil sings
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    and what it brings

    Just lots of useless
    little things
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  5. October 10th, 2020, 05:14 PM #5
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    Hi bob, sadly I've had to put my own writing on the back burner while I work backstage on WF.
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