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  1. #11
    this isoff the rtop of my headr.. I can't remember it all
    it is an urban fantasy... so it has mmagic but it'sw usually used by people with a rare gentic trait.. they mature faster than others and are usually expert at a certain filled really young.. their abilities are great but they find that they are not experts at everything.... the main characcter finds herself stopping a blak medic in the first chapter as sge has her cop friend. chase him down..before crisita{MC} can see him run off he asks.... "why are ou our salvation....." and then is chased to a blind alley where he can't be found.... kelm{mc police friend} takes cristia home where she gets a letter that she is being drafted by the black medics.. she goes to the capital were she meats flonx{second to mc} who is escorted by to police men.... cristia orders he police men to arrest him but flonx shows a badge that is a sign the heis state certified.... they come to an argrement later.. maunly due to black mail... that cristia is to go to the rejex manner and investigate the strange distubances.. she gets to bring one friebnd... they show up latter at the train stop where the two medics.. flonx and critstia have a small argument about what it means to be a medic in the first place...

    I will sip a head
    after coming back from the train station.. cristia confront s a man that had confronted the two earlier to give him a piece of her mind.... se gets attacked and thuus the two medics have to fight off a horde of the creatures without souls known as the plastic.... after cristia saves flonx life using the abilitty known as medics rush.. and fairy flashl...{a.k.a fairy like flash bang balls of light and real fast acting healing magic,,,} the two go to a hidden hotel/safe house where we meet a third secondary character lkown as tenkay... crisita figures out she is both a black medic and a white medic.. eventually they find some clue to who may know who is realeasing/creating the plastic.. they ead top te man known as tyler canns company... only to figure out he is one of the enemies.. they get driugged and wake up in cages hanging above a pit of that is like a grider for fish parts...

    those are the first five to six chapters worth of information off the top of my head.. I just did them as I remembered them... I wil need to reread the work in ordertt o knowit all...
    striding and swagering rootlessness with out end the precious flow of life.

  2. #12
    Kunox I got this email today so I will share it incase you decide on it. I have used it and it worked for me. I misspelled the name of the software.

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    As for the story I understand what you posted. But you need to fix the grammar of your post. Thanks for posting the summary. I still think you could proofread better if you had this software. It was developed based on research on both dyslexia and dysgraphia. They don't much on an online English website, so you need to translate it into english what is in french. Most of it is in French. I am trying to help you make it easier for yourself to correct your english. I am bringing this up since english is a basic skill all writers need. I understand you are trying hard. So I don't mean disrespect. I know how that feels. I have been there before.

    Maybe if you think of a better title if this is a placeholder it can make the story and artwork complement one another.
    Last edited by Theglasshouse; June 8th, 2020 at 05:22 AM.
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  3. #13
    I am going to be honest. I had to speed through it to remember. I didn't really do much editing. I should have though. I just had to do something else at the time. there are no real conspiracy going on other than no one knows the black medics are goverment owned. people just think they are an out of the blue organization of vigilantes, that is the conspiracy that is here but it's not the main story plot, the war with the plastic is.
    p.s. the medical symbol os right in the picture though. it's supposed to be two different organizations not one the left and right of the white and black logos where wghat I wanted but I got nine different versions of.
    striding and swagering rootlessness with out end the precious flow of life.

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    The medical symbol is what half of this is based off of.
    striding and swagering rootlessness with out end the precious flow of life.

  5. #15
    I have the same opinion as Biro as in it will probably confuse some people and throw them off what the story is about. However, think over what I said. Because if you do some of the editing you can eventually write some short stories. I forgot the name of the symbol. But the logo is based on a serpent I think. I've seen it before. I agree if you can change it to take into consideration not to put the pyramid. The medic symbol makes sense. A cover logo shouldn't be confusing.

    You can at some point in the future email the company in the contact form if you ever change your mind by giving your name, email, and what language version you want to use (say you have a certain diagnosis, it is for all types of disabled people). Use this recommendation as a future reference. In the future and at some point you will need to edit yourself.


    https://www.canva.com/learn/book-cov...nt-to-pick-up/

    Use white space for a professional touch. Set the tone before you start designing. Use photography for a professional touch. There are some more pointers in the article for the cover.

    Because you will want to practice writing short works at some point in the future. If you do that. I can try to help you with short stories by checking on how you did with the grammar. You can modify the text's character and line spacing. It even let's you work in microsoft word. So if you are using ginger you can use both as long as you save it to rtf document format. Then you can edit in word. You can change the color of the document background. The speech engine is very good to listen to correct mistakes. You can even leave a voice note as you read the document. It can read your posts on the web. Those are the features.

    They say you shouldn’t judge a book by its cover. But the truth is, book cover design can make or break a book.Book cover design is a crucial part of your marketing effort. You can string together the most insightful, lyrical words ever connected in human history, but if your book cover looks like Photoshop amateur hour, no one will ever pick it up.
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    https://www.canva.com/learn/book-cov...nt-to-pick-up/
    I would follow as in believe in the words of good moral leaders. Rather than the beliefs of oneself.
    The most difficult thing for a writer to comprehend is to experience silence, so speak up. (quoted from a member)

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    It's the wrong title but it's better than the others....
    striding and swagering rootlessness with out end the precious flow of life.

  7. #17
    Yes it seems more ordinary than a pyramid in front of it. You have to have eye-catching art to make sure they look at your book as has been said by others. But that is an improvement.
    I would follow as in believe in the words of good moral leaders. Rather than the beliefs of oneself.
    The most difficult thing for a writer to comprehend is to experience silence, so speak up. (quoted from a member)

  8. #18
    ty.. the glass house.. I will be looking into it...
    striding and swagering rootlessness with out end the precious flow of life.

  9. #19
    I hope you get more replies. Also, glad to hear you will give the trial a try.
    I would follow as in believe in the words of good moral leaders. Rather than the beliefs of oneself.
    The most difficult thing for a writer to comprehend is to experience silence, so speak up. (quoted from a member)

  10. #20
    Also, the program works in microsoft word very well. I am genuinely surprised it works there. That saves a lot of time.
    I would follow as in believe in the words of good moral leaders. Rather than the beliefs of oneself.
    The most difficult thing for a writer to comprehend is to experience silence, so speak up. (quoted from a member)

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