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    Smile All and None

    I am all of that, yet I am none
    I’ve seen your prospective and all others
    I’ve added in sum
    subtracted found common factors
    heard all of the songs sung
    took parallel pieces
    seen aunts uncles nieces
    the old and the young
    studied stories, read history
    and from which they come from
    I’ve lived it, eye scene it
    breath air in my lungs.
    As below so above never ending it runs
    seeing just how its written that God is just love.

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    You write musically, which I like a lot, I also like how your end-rhymes aren't forced, and how they run through the whole poem (none, sum, song, young, from, lungs, runs)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Darren White View Post
    You write musically, which I like a lot, I also like how your end-rhymes aren't forced, and how they run through the whole poem (none, sum, song, young, from, lungs, runs)
    Hello Darren, I am glad you like it. I do really enjoy writing, and yes I do often do an abstract form of hip hop and record it. I would like to eventually become a rapper. Most of my stuff is closer to spoken word with a mix of hip hop. I still need a lot of work vocally. I keep working at it. Thanks again brother.

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