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    Last edited by Scr1pter; December 29th, 2019 at 02:11 AM. Reason: Added lyrics

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    k.
    lyrics for the 3rd progression could appear in the ^bove.

    as to the barrage-o-blog,
    fly back through
    and check
    the format.

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    Quote Originally Posted by -xXx- View Post
    k.
    lyrics for the 3rd progression could appear in the ^bove.

    as to the barrage-o-blog,
    fly back through
    and check
    the format.

    perpetualrunoncanbedifficultforpotentiallyinterest edphoakstosort
    jussayin'

    Thanks for the reply. If you were saying it was hard to understand in the beginning I agree with you. I am not very good with recording atm but I am getting better.
    I have done another verse and the recording is a little better I think. This is a progression thing I am doing, so here is my next progression

    https://soundcloud.com/scr1pter/i-against-all-4

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    That's pretty awesome. Can't really fault the lyrics. Only thing I would say is to try and vary your intonation or cadence a little more, to give the whole thing more "shape".


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    Yeah I agree thank you. The mono tone thing isn't working.

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    I dig the words but the link is not available. I have soundcloud, do I need to be logged in or is it a private link now? Thank you for sharing and hope to listen soon.

    Best,

    W,.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Scr1pter View Post
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    try this:

    main page
    behold list

    progression 4
    test prg4
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    Quote Originally Posted by -xXx- View Post
    -clrtxt-
    -tstfl-

    try this:

    main page
    behold list

    progression 4
    test prg4
    Thank you!

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    Listening now. Thank you for sharing, Scr1pter.

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    I like this. I think your voice sounds good, lyrics too. I couldn't rap at the tempo you are with that many syllables. I'd say slow it down. Check dB level changes on mic if this isn't just a "scratch" vocal, meaning a guide / demo rather than master edit. Keep it up. I like this article below. I also felt blending voca!s to backing tracks is hard if you don't have the sep. tracks of the song. Even then it's hard. But I started researching side compressors because it may help but I don't know. It might be a small file your working with for instruments, so it may make it worse.

    Thank you for sharing. You almost got it where you want it, as long as you perfect the lower end too. Keep Sharing. W

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