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  1. #381
    Quote Originally Posted by Matchu View Post
    Could I be a yudge, please?
    Oh yes, you awesome person!
    When the night has come
    And the land is dark
    And the moon is the only light we'll see
    I won't be afraid, no I won't be afraid
    Just as long as you stand by me.


  2. #382
    I know this is a busy time for everyone - well, maybe not busy but time-robbing all the same. I need three more judges< please and thank you!
    When the night has come
    And the land is dark
    And the moon is the only light we'll see
    I won't be afraid, no I won't be afraid
    Just as long as you stand by me.


  3. #383
    Quote Originally Posted by SueC View Post
    I know this is a busy time for everyone - well, maybe not busy but time-robbing all the same. I need three more judges< please and thank you!
    I. I shall do it. I.




    Hidden Content Monthly Fiction Challenge


    The first cut don't hurt at all
    The second only makes you wonder
    The third will have you on your knee
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    - Propaganda, "Duel"

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    Is this fire, or is this mask?
    It's the Mantasy!
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  4. #384
    Jennifer Lawrence voice: I volunteer as tribute!

    (I will judge, if needed.)

  5. #385
    I'm busy with Christmas pet portraits (my side business) right now, but it looks like "The Frost Lands" won the Prompt Poll. I've gone ahead and created the ad which is ready to go.

    Please note that I made an executive decision and listed the deadline as December 15, so please match that when you create the thread.

    Cheers!

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  6. #386
    I had initially put in the 16th, due to this being posted on the 2nd, but have changed it to the 15th. Thank you for taking the initiative!
    When the night has come
    And the land is dark
    And the moon is the only light we'll see
    I won't be afraid, no I won't be afraid
    Just as long as you stand by me.


  7. #387
    Nice, we just had our first snowfall here in PA and it was decent enough that I'm looking out my window at some pretty frosty inspiration. Looking forward to giving this one a whirl!

  8. #388
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    I like this theme, it has been a while since I took part in this challenge shall see if I can write something good to submit.

    Can't wait to read all the entries.
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  9. #389
    forgive the edit ins, please.
    may need to save 'cuz traffic is craaaazzzzzy.

    some info on november LM scores:

    3 categories of 3 each:
    some now
    god's pen
    retrograde

    the general rubric used during consideration of each submission:
    Action
    *Character
    Conflict
    Dialogue
    -Genre
    Language
    Mood
    -Narrative mode
    Pace
    *Plot
    Point of view
    Setting
    -Style
    *Theme
    *Tone

    past score info/reference/process:
    2020 aug
    2020 oct
    these provide some info
    on grammar/sentiment/readability, etc.
    *IF you are interested in publishing,
    especially publishing for conventional/mainstream readers,
    LEXILE is a word worth exploring.

    sooooo,
    punctuation in compound/complex sentences
    and/or clauses.

    *looks for robust forumites*
    *no clarifications emerge*
    *looks in spag*
    *sputters*

    this is not an endorsement
    of this edit service site.

    it appeared to load cleanly
    and
    used some examples.
    because there are excellent crafters
    participating regularly in the LM Challenge,
    perhaps a kwikref<--clicky
    would be helpful.

    ===append12082020t
    even better
    sort-of-kwikref<---clicky
    indirectly suggested
    by a WF master wordsmith.
    *thx4meaningfulredirect*
    Last edited by -xXx-; December 8th, 2020 at 04:52 PM.
    " I like it, but I donít get it." - Megan WF April LM Challenge

    "Hereby copyright for all things Xonian and Xxildurim is transferred to one named -xXx-" - Mish The Question Game 2458

    "...intrusively poetic, robotic way of articulating thought." - Sycamore LM coffee shop 347

    i wrote this:
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  10. #390
    Not a whole lot of complaints here, except the fact that the ending was AWFUL! in that tear-jerking, that's-not-fair-and-I-hate-that-it-happened-and-I'm-gonna-write-my-OWN-ending type way. Did she have to commit suicide? I suppose so. Regardless, this was extremely solid. Great imagery, pacing, twists coming that I didn't see but still made sense...yeah, I liked this. Don't really care that not every line 'made sense' logically. The mood was there.
    i would like to nominate this for
    WF best of 2020: LM judge response

    k.
    " I like it, but I donít get it." - Megan WF April LM Challenge

    "Hereby copyright for all things Xonian and Xxildurim is transferred to one named -xXx-" - Mish The Question Game 2458

    "...intrusively poetic, robotic way of articulating thought." - Sycamore LM coffee shop 347

    i wrote this:
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    *flash*
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