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  1. #21
    Quote Originally Posted by luckyscars View Post
    Using longer words sounds purplish to me. This is a retrospective narrative - who would ever talk about a sign proclaiming or declaring in ordinary discourse?
    Fair; I agree. Overall I'd just prefer re-wording it.
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  2. #22
    I think having a discourse with a sign wouldn't be such a bad story.

    "Population 6,532," the sign proclaimed.

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