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    Short Film (Comedy - 21 pages)

    Would anyone mind reading my short script? I wrote it the other day, and I just want to know if it's okay. It's a comedy about a demonic possession. I might film it with friends and post it online for fun.

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    • TITLE: Untitled
    • GENRE: Comedy
    • WORD COUNT: 3089
    • BLURB: Young man must stop demon from ending the world.
    • AUDIENCE DESCRIPTION: 20s-30s and possibly older if you don't mind immature characters.
    • EXPECTATIONS (Explain the type of feedback you required and the mechanism that will be used to gather it, such as use of on-line forms, questionnaires with MSS, etc.)
    • TIMESCALE: A week or sooner preferably
    • AVAILABLE FORMATS: PDF file or I can upload it to google docs if preferred
    • OTHER INFORMATION: It's about demonic possession, but it's still pretty light.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Darren White View Post
    Welcome to our forums

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    I replied with the info you requested, but the comment hasn't been moderated.
    Last edited by Kist; August 14th, 2019 at 04:39 PM. Reason: mistype

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    Yeah, I noticed. Posts in this forum are automatically put in moderation. I do my best to be online as much as possible to approve them, here it is

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    Kist, you might find that by reading and commenting on other authors' stories that you'll get more beta interest here. I know beta work takes time out of a busy schedule, but by taking time and care with other members work, other authors wlll do the same with you.
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    At 3K words, it won't take long. Pm it to me and I'll give my thruppence-worth. Sounds like it could be fun! Give me a couple of days, though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fatclub View Post
    At 3K words, it won't take long. Pm it to me and I'll give my thruppence-worth. Sounds like it could be fun! Give me a couple of days, though.
    Excellent! It's mostly dialogue, so it should be an easy read. I've uploaded it to my google drive. I'll PM you the link.

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    If you still need another Beta reader, I could look at your script.

    But will you comment on my short story? (6,000 words)

    If so, we can do an e-mail exchange.

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