I am looking for anyone who wants to give an honest critique. I would be happy to do a swap or partial swap as well! Thanks so much!
TITLE The Fallen
GENRE new adult fiction, possibly YA but might be a bit too graphic
WORD COUNT 97,000
AUDIENCE DESCRIPTION Young adult, 18+ who aren't afraid of more intense scenes
EXPECTATIONS I'd love any type of feedback, from grammar to plot and continuity
TIMESCALE Anything really, preferably no more than 4 months, but I'll gladly take what I get
AVAILABLE FORMATS PDF, Google Drive, word doc, whatever is best
OTHER INFORMATION Some graphic, violent scenes, swearing, nothing too over the top but wouldn't recommend for people who find a few cuss words inappropriate
BLURB:
Jake Anderson thought he had everything.
He was captain and starting quarterback of the varsity football team; he was going to get a full ride athletic scholarship to the college of his dreams. He had the perfect, popular, beautiful girlfriend. A family who supported him, a dad who pushed him to be better, a mom who told him he was great and a little sister who kept him grounded.
Jake had his entire life before him, a planned, perfect life.
Until the girl. And the murder.
Annie Darling knows she has nothing. Knows she is nothing. No family, no future, only a past that she keeps trying to keep in the past. Memories she doesn’t want had been safely tucked away, but now, after the boy, after the accident, they are blurring the lines of what is real and what is not.
Jake is barely surviving. His family is gone, his future is gone, and it doesn’t look like his girlfriend is going to stick around much longer.
The novel is told through the eyes of two teenagers as they struggle to repair their lives after an accident forces them together.
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