TuesdayEve #8 +#9 NaPo 2019


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    TuesdayEve #8 +#9 NaPo 2019

    #8

    jeweled twigs
    sparkling ice beads
    breakfast for my eyes

    #9

    I Am Your Slave

    My heart quickens in your presence
    my eyes caress you with a glance
    I’ve tried to live without you
    but the taste of memory is not enough
    your smooth invitations woo me
    and your sweet bitterness leaves me begging for more
    I melt with you
    we become one
    chocolate I am yours

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    I like #8 much
    and I really had to chuckle about #9

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    really like 'I am your slave' - well-worded with a funny twist.
    grasp the mettle of things unsaid
    and strike the nail upon the head

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    #9, definitely speaks for me, er, I mean speaks to me...
    There is no life I know
    To compare with pure imagination.
    Living there you’ll be free
    If you truly wish to be.~ Willy Wonka

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    Tuesday, you have two really good poems here. #8 Really is a gem #9 wasn’t that far behind, unexpected ending but one I do agree with.
    "Illegitimi non carborundum " Vinegar' Joe Stilwell

    "Faith is taking the first step, even when you don't see the whole staircase." Martin Luther King Jr.

    What you learn in life is important, those you help learn, are more important.

    "They can because they think they can."
    ​Virgil

    "Wise men speak because they have something to say; Fools will speak to say something." Plato

    "The only difference between reality and fiction is that fiction needs to be credible."
    ​ Mark Twain

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