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    Kevin - Back home, we were both poor and also fish eaters who would never think of swallowing gold fish whole without frying them first. LOL. Human beings!.......You gotta luv the carnivore in us! Whoa! Enjoyed your work Kevin. Namyh
    P.S. - Now all of a sudden I'm hungry!

  2. #12
    I understand the gist of it I'm just not sure how well it comes off

  3. #13
    For me, this was about those rash decisions you make in the moment, and regret them almost as soon as they begin but you have to proceed.

    That's what I got from: '
    you can't help but inhale more deeply. '

    I liked this, as well talked to me about the inherent evils of the human condition.

    'We're monsters you see

    -doing monstrous things'

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    This started off okay. Yeah, I get it, you're trying to be minimalist- small images, bla bla bla. But... Dude... The fart part? Couldn't you have used a less embarrassing comparison?
    Keep writing, though you have a spark of depth, which is good.
    -Tessana

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