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    earth

    I can't
    go on
    living
    without
    you
    The only one who can heal you is you.




  2. #2
    That's a smart one, I like it
    Would you believe me if I tell you it can even be more minimalist and still be very true if you cut the word 'living?'
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    ditto with darren.

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    Escorial - Now ain't that the living truth. Very nice capture. Namyh

  5. #5
    this planet will heal itself long after humanity has destroyed itself .cheers Namyh
    The only one who can heal you is you.




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    Quote Originally Posted by Darren White View Post
    Would you believe me if I tell you it can even be more minimalist and still be very true if you cut the word 'living?'
    this planet will heal itself long after humanity has destroyed itself
    Therefore I think the living is the important bit, one could cut the 'I'

    Living
    can't go
    on without
    You.

    But I think I prefer the original
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    Quote Originally Posted by escorial View Post
    I can't
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    you

  8. #8
    Cool
    The only one who can heal you is you.




  9. #9
    Nice

    Though I imagine this an ironic poem a thousand years into the future.

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    do you reckon humans will be here in 1k....?
    The only one who can heal you is you.




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