Deeper Knight of the Ebb Tide

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    Deeper Knight of the Ebb Tide

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    Last edited by Darkkin; January 25th, 2019 at 03:40 AM.


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    Darkkin;
    A very deep poem, ballad to me. It seems to be a sequal to your earlier one and as my knowledge of the Constellations starts and ends at the Big Dipper and Orion's Belt, it would be hard for me to offer commentary for that reason and your excellent poetic ability. I'll offer that they were flowing pieces with vivid imagery and thanks for sharing them with us.
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    hello D - saved this one til last...

    and as ever, I succumb to the dreamscape of the verses, unconsciously losing the plot.

    at once, vivid and candescent....

    sweet dreams..........................Ned
    Last edited by ned; November 20th, 2018 at 01:48 AM.

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    Once again... and every time, you weave such magic, this sounds like something out of an ancient, leatherbound book, yet your message is timeless and so stunningly beautiful... I treasure your poetry as a way to escape the grey mundane world...

    I wonder... what will happen, when you finish your StrangeWays saga.... hopefully you will continue to enchant your readers....
    She lost herself in the trees,
    among the ever-changing leaves.
    She wept beneath the wild sky
    as stars told stories of ancient times.
    The flowers grew toward her light,
    the river called her name at night.
    She could not live an ordinary life,
    with the mysteries of the universe
    hidden in her eyes....
    Author: Christy Ann Martine

    Death leaves a heartache no one can heal,
    love leaves a memory no one can steal....
    Author unknown.

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    There will always be one more story, one more journey into pockets unknown...Only when all the stars of the Sock Fox's pelt are numbered and named will the tales cease.


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    Your work always feels like a wonderful and epic journey, I just don't always know where it is taking me. But I enjoy spending a bit of time in another world!
    There is no life I know
    To compare with pure imagination.
    Living there you’ll be free
    If you truly wish to be.~ Willy Wonka

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