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  1. #11
    hello Pel - for me, your suggestions don't add anything - other than upsetting the rhythm and rhyme......don't you see that?

    but I thank you for reading and your input.........................Ned

  2. #12
    As I PM'd, so went back and reread and reread and yeah, my suggestions just are way out of form for your poem.
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