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    Come As You Aren't

    Here's me delving into the country song genre:

    Come As You Aren't
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    Marty... you know my love is real
    I'll say this now, you'll need time to heal
    This is harder than you know
    If you get mad, please, let it go

    We ate dinner at your aunt's
    And you're napkin was your pants
    So many noises when you eat
    Those worn boots around your feet



    We've been invited to a party
    So please just this time Marty
    You'll be coming from those fields you farm...
    Come as you aren't




    You just won't impress my friends
    With your long sleeve, flannel blends
    And I know you're sweat soaked shirt
    Is from working hard out in the dirt

    Now don't look at me like that
    Like I'm some rich spoiled brat
    But the world can't always see
    What your rough hands mean to me




    We've been invited to a party
    So please just this time, Marty
    You'll be coming from those fields you farm...
    Come as you aren't

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    Very clever story line! Not what I expected to read by the title alone, and unpredictability is key to good songwriting. Well done I think!

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    Quote Originally Posted by RobbieO View Post
    Very clever story line! Not what I expected to read by the title alone, and unpredictability is key to good songwriting. Well done I think!
    Lol, I like your "...I think!"
    Yeah, I just like the puns used in country songs and I think I thought of this one first.
    I didn't put nearly as much effort as you did in your "Die Dreaming" but I had fun.
    I'll be commenting on your song when I get back from where I'm going.
    If you look at my profile, say "Hi!" But not in a creepy way.

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