New Vision for a New World
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    New Vision for a New World

    Two screens throughout the working day
    office desk with side by side displays
    Phones held under tables during dinners
    Tablets serving as baby sitters
    Maps and schedules in train stations
    Direction shown on cars' navigation
    Game on a TV sixty inches wide
    Escape to theaters with IMAX inside
    The fake mundane of a naked scene
    pales to the real beauty upon the screen
    I find that my lack of knowledge can sometimes be an asset in that I'm forced to try new things because I don't have any other options.

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    I like the idea of what you're getting across but I think it's too blatant and a little dry...make it feel more

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    Quote Originally Posted by undead_av View Post
    I think it's too blatant and a little dry...make it feel more
    I think you may be right on the blatant point but I feel the dryness with the topic makes the poem. It feels like all of life is a list and we are all just checking off on our way through.


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