Ode To Enigma

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    Ode To Enigma

    Listen up
    I got a million problems worth fixing.

    A choreograph number with them
    Cha-cha-cha like a muchacho
    Mexican
    I find my conundrums a dome little radio
    blaring in my ear like Ambulance sirens.

    Where are my + and -?
    Batteries and atoms

    Come in sync like a 2000’s pop song
    Problems need polishing.

    To washbasin cleaning and tapwater

  2. #2
    Not sure how to read the + and -

    I admit that this piece went clear over my head.

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    Read it as positives and negatives? Maybe I'll just write it like that.

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    Nice. You've blended mechanics and problems, very contemporary.

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