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    Afraid

    To protect my publication rights' I'm moving this poem to the workshop. Thank you.
    Last edited by Pelwrath; May 12th, 2018 at 10:47 PM.
    "Illegitimi non carborundum " Vinegar' Joe Stilwell

    "Faith is taking the first step, even when you don't see the whole staircase." Martin Luther King Jr.

    What you learn in life is important, those you help learn, are more important.

    "They can because they think they can."
    ​Virgil

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    hello - not sure what you're getting at here -

    fear of some sort, but it's a garbled message-

    the opening verse is confusing - you are Don and Sancho, then you are Dulcinea.

    To her was written poems, - to her were written poems

    Then I was called me El Campeador - another personality? - watch the typo.

    What if you’re afraid of yourself? - what if? - show us what you mean.

    for me, too mysterious to engage................Ned

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