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    It was a good read. The only point that caught my attention that made me wonder was the statement the the main character had the highest vantage point in the neighborhood.

    Since I live with the highest vantage point in the area, I can survey all the rich people down below. They're not as wealthy as me but they do well.


    There's this old guy that sits out on his deck and looks through a telescope all day

    I would have thought he would have thought he would have been seen, as he was out on the deck.


    I like the story, It is a good idea for one, and one that makes perfect sense. Thanks for the read Bob


    God hates a coward Revelation 21:8

    “Good writin' ain't necessarily good readin'.”

    Ken Kesey,

    To encourage and facilitate "me"

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    Thank you Bob,

    It was subtle but I did think about the visibility. (You can't see Forrest for the trees)

    I appreciate your reading my story!
    If you look at my profile, say "Hi!" But not in a creepy way.

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