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    #30 Untitled NaPoWriMo

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    Through eyes of a child
    yearns nurturing
    desperately aches for ordinary days
    breakfast table
    a kiss before school
    bedtime stories
    hosted by evenings
    mundane reminders
    to brush your teeth
    routines by the millions
    absent

    Mother’s trust
    long erased by demons
    resurrect from depths
    unexplored by her
    the unresolved of the mother
    impacts the child
    pursued by hairbrush looks
    and belted threats
    nails on a blackboard
    cringe from gut to ear
    screech a vodka halo
    slide away and disappear

    Winding road of deep hill plunges
    black ice, potholes and gravel skids
    sabotage the drive through life
    no warnings of detours, delays or floods

    The eyes of a child
    invite comforting words
    mundane routines
    and ordinary days

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    Firstly: CONGRATULATIONS
    You did it, 30 poems!

    And then the poem, won't critique, just want to say that it is so true. I would have given anything to have mundane routines and ordinary days.
    Except perhaps that I probably wouldn't have become a poet
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    First, congrats on your 30th poem! How, true what a child really wants. A very good finish. I’ve some catching up to do tonight with your and a few others poetry.
    "Illegitimi non carborundum " Vinegar' Joe Stilwell

    "Faith is taking the first step, even when you don't see the whole staircase." Martin Luther King Jr.

    What you learn in life is important, those you help learn, are more important.

    "They can because they think they can."
    ​Virgil

    "Wise men speak because they have something to say; Fools will speak to say something." Plato

    "The only difference between reality and fiction is that fiction needs to be credible."
    ​ Mark Twain

    "To those of you who received honors, awards and distinctions, I say well done. And to the C students, I say you, too, can be president of the United States." George W. Bush



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