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    #6 Thank You

    Thank You

    A butterfly came to my dreams
    Large white wings did spread
    Sat quietly and let me observe
    Last edited by TuesdayEve; April 6th, 2018 at 01:19 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TuesdayEve View Post
    Thank You

    A butterfly came to my dreams
    Large white wings did spread
    I would cut "did".... and maybe something more descriptive than "large"... Luminous, iridescent .... something to add stronger imagery ;
    Sat quietly and let me observe
    Mysterious and magical...
    She lost herself in the trees,
    among the ever-changing leaves.
    She wept beneath the wild sky
    as stars told stories of ancient times.
    The flowers grew toward her light,
    the river called her name at night.
    She could not live an ordinary life,
    with the mysteries of the universe
    hidden in her eyes....
    Author: Christy Ann Martine

    Death leaves a heartache no one can heal,
    love leaves a memory no one can steal....
    Author unknown.

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