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    RoP's thingamawhatsit

    This is here because I dedicated myself to this ish for some reason or another. Here's to a whole month of creativity?
    My favorite word in the English language is "shenanigans." My favorite thing to do is cause them.

    Smoke weed everyday.

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    Allocated Valor
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    We want it all to make perfect sense;
    for every nuance to climb the fence,
    every concept to yield defence,
    every construct to be immense;
    regardless of the consequence
    EVERYTHING must make sense,
    even that which needs pretense
    to validate the mind's prepence
    to seek, establish subtence,
    and bolster ideas akin to propence;
    write manifestos ad extense,
    promote concepts of pluripresence,
    and spew general nonsense.

    ~~~~

    YAY RHYMES!
    Last edited by RhythmOvPain; April 1st, 2018 at 10:23 PM. Reason: PUNCTUATION, GAWD DAMN EET.
    My favorite word in the English language is "shenanigans." My favorite thing to do is cause them.

    Smoke weed everyday.

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    Fun and lots of meaning hidden along the way. And the rhymes are great.

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    Tee hee for monorhyme!
    Well done
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    وَنَحْنُ نُحِبُّ الحَيَاةَ إذَا مَا اسْتَطَعْنَا إِلَيْهَا سَبِيلاَ
    "we love life, if it allows us to walk down her road"
    -Mahmoud Darwish (translation: Darren White)


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    The mind's prepence, very good. The rhyme is well done.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Pelwrath View Post
    The mind's prepence, very good. The rhyme is well done.
    While I know the dichotomy between propencity and prepence, I'm at a loss as to the spelling of said words and their derivitives from an etymological standpoint.

    I suppose it doesn't matter, but deep down I think it does.

    "S" vs "C," anyone?
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    My favorite word in the English language is "shenanigans." My favorite thing to do is cause them.

    Smoke weed everyday.

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    I enjoyed readin this poem, it flowed nicely for me and gave a great rhymeing structure. Looking forward to seeing more poetry from you over the month.
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    I love the rhyming!!! And learned a couple of new words too. Nicely done!
    “It's weird not to be weird." — John Lennon

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    Beyond The Ether
    ----------------------------

    Alas; a light has disappeared
    in a blanket of dust.
    Refraction kisses darkness,
    slowly it dissipates;
    the refulgent dazzle,
    delineated by desolation,
    has died.

    ~~~

    Alliteration because whatever.
    Last edited by RhythmOvPain; April 2nd, 2018 at 07:03 PM. Reason: Spelling.
    My favorite word in the English language is "shenanigans." My favorite thing to do is cause them.

    Smoke weed everyday.

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    Dear ROP,
    No. 1 was reading rhyming fun.
    No. 2 was alliteration fun.
    Like Sara, I’m learning new words.

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