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    Snowfall on Varteg Hill

    Gently drifting, birch bough kissing,
    the moment framed by a jackdaw calling
    with barely a breath atop of the hill.
    And even though flakes are falling,
    time, like the lone snowman, stands still.


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    Snowfall

    Gently drifting, birch bough kissing
    the moment framed by a jackdaw calling.
    With hardly a breath as I climb the hill,
    and though, all around, the snow is falling,
    it feels like time has stood still.
    Last edited by ned; January 3rd, 2018 at 07:22 PM. Reason: the the

  2. #12
    Some times you need to take a deep breath, slowly exhale then laugh.
    "Illegitimi non carborundum " Vinegar' Joe Stilwell

    "Faith is taking the first step, even when you don't see the whole staircase." Martin Luther King Jr.

    What you learn in life is important, those you help learn, are more important.

    "They can because they think they can."
    ​Virgil

  3. #13
    Squalid and Andrew, thanks very much for your time, dedication and ability to score the poems for this month.
    "Illegitimi non carborundum " Vinegar' Joe Stilwell

    "Faith is taking the first step, even when you don't see the whole staircase." Martin Luther King Jr.

    What you learn in life is important, those you help learn, are more important.

    "They can because they think they can."
    ​Virgil

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