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    "New World", Prologue

    this is my first post here and i decided to gets some help and thoughts about my novel. i'm almost finished but i still need input on the rough draft. my other writer friends say i have something here. what do you think? keep in mind, this is a rough draft. it is full of errors and mistakes. it's just a pile of sand. i haven't turned it into a sandcastle yet.




    PROLOGUE



    I am no one and everyone.


    I know that statement is very vague and broad but it is the most fitting of statements for a being such as I.

    I am no one and everyone, a face in the crowd that blurs into the others, a stranger to be exact, which is fine by me. I prefer this status. It gives me an amount of anonymity that favors what I do. What is it that I do? I............ observe; People, places, events, stories and such. It’s a hobby of mine. And when you are being who is unbound by the limits of space and time, you need lots of hobbies or go crazy and I've been crazy. It's not very fun. My identity and how I came to be in this peculiar situation of mine is unimportant at this time. What is important is the story that I am about to share with you. My status as a unbound being will give more credence to the tale and its setting. Why is this important? Simple. Because what you are about to experience is beyond your understanding from the world you live in.


    Now, please understand. When I say “your world”, I do not mean that this story doesn’t take place in some far off alien world in a distant galaxy. It occurs here, earth, 3rd planet in the system of sol, milky way galaxy. When I say “your world”, I mean the era in which you currently live in, commonly know in this era as “the old world”. Keep this in mind as I relate to you the facts that lead up to the story.


    The creation of the current era begins in the 21st century, 2047 to be exact. I guess you could call it a golden age, if that what one looks like. Humanity had reach a point in its history that it could be called it a golden age, and with good reason too; global relations between nations were such that mass scale wars was a thing of the past, medical science had progressed to the point where crippling and deadly diseases were stamped out, cybernetics and cryonics became viable fields of study, economic problems were reduced to the minimum levels possible, and the united states celebrated the election of its first Latino president, Isaac Alvarez, who started his term by annexing Puerto Rico and Cuba into the union as the 51st and 52nd states respectively. Truly, it was a good time to live on earth.

    In my observations of humanity and its various nations, counties, and cultures, I have learned one thing: humans are arrogant. Truthfully. Humans have this almost genetic belief that they are the center of the universe and that everything they say and do is correct and right and perfect in the eyes of their god. They break themselves out of this egotistical mindset via what I call 'hard lessons'. At this time, they were gonna learn another yet lesson.

    Nov. 2nd, 2047

    Just another day on this little blue marble in space. At least, that’s what they thought. On this night, a event would occur that would become another hard lesson for mankind and create another new era for earth.

    The moon exploded.

    This is what the 2 million plus people who happened to be watching the sky that night said when asked what they saw. The moon simply blew up.
    This proved a false assumption however as the moon did not truly explode. More like, something hit the moon, causing a good part of it blow off into millions of pieces. 2/3 of the moon was blown off in that instant. In under an hour, every space agency, dot.com, and anyone with a telescope began to speculate about what exactly happened. Some thought it was rogue piece of space junk that hit. Others say it was a rare convergence of space rays that happened once every one million or so years. A few even suggested that a errant nuke from Russia's space program from the days of the cold war malfunctioned and launched, colliding into our nearest celestial neighbor. Even I, with my status, have not been about to ascertain the true cause of this event. All I’ve heard is rumor and theory.

    Needless to say, the resulting impact of this event was felt almost immediately. Global tidal changes happened almost over night, with cities such as New York, Los angles, and San Francisco found themselves treading water. large chunks of the moon that were blown off became a rain of death that pummeled the planet for 7 straight days, destroying cities, killing millions, rendering most of the nations on earth into utter chaos and changing the very landmasses themselves forever.

    Sky fall.


    That is the name that this catastrophe would be known by in history. Now, I have no idea who came up with the term or where it originated from. Its just something that appeared one day in books, newspapers, and documents over time. Not that I care really. It just fit with what happened. Now this was a hard lesson that would humble anyone but it was only the first hard lesson that mankind would learn in the coming years.

    3 months after sky fall, the reports began to surface in the greater US, reports of people who were seemed stronger than most, hated direct sunlight and seemed to enjoy consuming blood. Human blood. A few were captured and examined. They knew what these creatures were but weren't willing to admit that they actually existed. The results of theses examinations proved the old stories were true.

    Vampires. The ancient blood drinkers of European lore were indeed real and apparently living among them, blending in with humans for thousands of years. For a time, hunting these creatures was a way for humanity to cope, take its mind off their ruined world and these poor creatures became the focal point for their rage and hatred. Soon, however, as more and more vampires appeared in other nations, they began to realize that this wasn’t just some random grouping or small gatherings of the night creatures. No, this……was a nation.

    A nation of vampires.

    And they would be silent no longer.

    And they were not alone.

    The others had hidden themselves in the shadows of history and veils of myth and legend but now, in this ruined world, they would and could return.

    Lycans, the creature of the hunt. Driven by their loyalty to the pack, they are born hunters with the power to shift from man to beast at will.

    Elves, the immortal masters of magic. Hidden in secret houses in the area known as the Bermuda Triangle, elves preferred to keep to themselves rather that hide among the lesser humans.

    Dwarves, the diminutive race of craftsmen. Living under the mountains, dwarves have been building cities of architectural genius since before humans learned to build straw huts.

    One by one, these races emerged and humans learned that their world, which they claimed to be utter masters of, wasn’t just reserved just for them alone. Not anymore. And Of course, they didn’t exactly take this lightly.
    Thus we enter “The Chaotic Century”. Actually, it's more like 94 years really but a century sounds better, I guess. This was a time of bitter conflict between the three top races: humans, vampires, and lycans. All three battling for what little remained of the world. For a long time, it was something of a stalemate, with no one race coming out on top.

    That was until firestorm hit.

    It was a virus, plain and simple. A deadly, virulent virus. It always seems to be that mankind’s greatest enemy has always been that smallest of organisms, always brought low by some disease and this one was no different. It came on suddenly and without warning, sweeping through the remaining human cities like a firestorm, hence the name. there was no cure or proper treatment for it but none was needed as like all plagues, it simply died out. Sadly, the damage was done. More than 1 billion humans died in the span of 10 years, more than half of the total remaining populace of the earth after Skyfall. By then, it was too late for them to actually win. Fighting the virus put them behind in the war for the world and in the end, vampires come out on top as the new dominate race of planet earth. Because of how their society views those who they see as the strongest, lycans came under the rule to their new lords, serving as soldiers, bodyguards, and enforcers, leaving humans unable to fight against this new world power.

    With their new status as the top of the world's global food chain, the vampires desired a nation, a true nation for their kind. Reaching a deal with the 70th and final president of the united states, Jackson Conroe, the vampires enacted the “Conroe treaty”, which effectively gave up control of the Continental US, Canada, Mexico, central America, and the tip of south America to the vampires. The Conroe treaty effective disbanded the united states as it was, thus establishing what is the now the grand Vampiric empire, lead by empire Vladimir Tepes Dracula II, the son of the first true king of all vampires. Being wise and fairer than you'd expect, Emperor Vlad II strive to create a true nation of all races, regards of their origins and encouraged all to stay and prosper, including humans. It goes without saying that humans are sore losers and were not about to live under the rule of the so-called “godless demons”. Less than 500,000 humans remained in the empire while the rest left for other nations and lands to dream of what once was.

    Well, that was over 1000 years ago.

    Since that time, the Empire has become one of this era's “3 Great Nations”, along side the Protectorate of Vatican and the Kingdom of Kahn.
    The Empire was founded in the first calendar year of the New World or 1 NW for you historians out there. It comprises all of what was once known as North America. This includes the old continental United States, the countries of Canada, Mexico, Central America, and the northern tip of South America. And all of this does not include the over 10 different colonies, territories, and allies the Empire has across the world.
    As the name implies obviously, it is ruled by a monarchy, the royal family of Dracula who have reigned for over 1000 years, from their floating castle that has been their home for generations. Just below them in the hierarchy is the high vampire houses, containing the so called "pure" vampires who make up the empire's nobility.

    Next are the Elven Strides, based in the Clear Islands just south of the empire. You might remember it as the Bermuda Triangle. yes. THAT Bermuda Triangle. The Strides were reasonable for the development and proliferation of Magi-Tek which has revolutionize commercial, medical, and military industries.

    On their level is Mountain lords, the 13 leaders of the 13 clans of the Dwarfish race based out of Russt, one of 7 wonders of the New World. The vampires ruled the empire. The Elves paid for it. And the Dwarves built it. It's said that no building, bridge, stadium, highway, or porta-potty goes up without Dwarf overseeing it. And with good reason. Dwarves are masters of architecture and engineering. It is considered foolish to build anything in the empire without them.

    The empire is divided up into 7 different regions: east coast, west coast, mid west, the slim south, the high north, the fat south, and new Texas. Each region is governed by a lord governor, who is elected by either the nobles of the high houses, the masters of the strides, or the mountain lords. But it is only through the approval of the emperor or a member of the royal family does the person actually gains the position.
    Militarily, it's standing army is second only to the P.O.V. Despite it's name, the Imperial armed forces are a patch work of different races: Vampires, Humans, Lycans, Sasquatches, Dwarves, Elves, Faes, and many other races who reside in the empire. The job of protecting the people and enforceing law and order falls to the Imperial Police Department or IPD for short. While anyone can enlist in the IPD, it is primarily composed of Lycans with some offices having Elves and Vampires in minor roles such as CSI agents, forensics experts, and information annalists.




    It is now the year 1076 NW.

    The world you know is gone.

    Welcome to the new world. And in the new world, everything is possible.

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    thank you. i wouldn't say there is horror elements in the book but interesting that you can see it.

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    I had a problem with the moon exploding. In the current day and age, astronomers all over the world are watching for comets and asteroids. The chances of some spacial body striking the moon, without lots of advance knowledge and media coverage is, in my opinion, small. And steps would have been taken to prevent it.

    I think this would work better on some other world. It would give you so much more freedom.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jack of all trades View Post
    I had a problem with the moon exploding. In the current day and age, astronomers all over the world are watching for comets and asteroids. The chances of some spacial body striking the moon, without lots of advance knowledge and media coverage is, in my opinion, small. And steps would have been taken to prevent it.

    I think this would work better on some other world. It would give you so much more freedom.
    who's to say it was a asteroid or something like that?

    i'm leaving that part a mystery.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jack of all trades View Post
    I had a problem with the moon exploding. In the current day and age, astronomers all over the world are watching for comets and asteroids. The chances of some spacial body striking the moon, without lots of advance knowledge and media coverage is, in my opinion, small. And steps would have been taken to prevent it.

    I think this would work better on some other world. It would give you so much more freedom.
    Actually not as small as you might think. Only a small percentage of asteroids have had their orbits plotted in enough detail to determine if they are a hazard to Earth. There are literally millions more which could be nudged into an Earth/moon intercept orbit by collisions with other asteroids, or by the gravitational effect of Mars or Jupiter. But a rogue asteroid isn't much of a worry, the chances are small. It's comets that pose a much greater risk. Comets spend most of their time in a literal 'cloud' surrounding the solar system and can drop in on us from any direction, at any time, with very little warning.

    Not that warning would make much of a difference. We don't, currently, have the technology to do anything about such a comet, or asteroid.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Terry D View Post
    Actually not as small as you might think. Only a small percentage of asteroids have had their orbits plotted in enough detail to determine if they are a hazard to Earth. There are literally millions more which could be nudged into an Earth/moon intercept orbit by collisions with other asteroids, or by the gravitational effect of Mars or Jupiter. But a rogue asteroid isn't much of a worry, the chances are small. It's comets that pose a much greater risk. Comets spend most of their time in a literal 'cloud' surrounding the solar system and can drop in on us from any direction, at any time, with very little warning.

    Not that warning would make much of a difference. We don't, currently, have the technology to do anything about such a comet, or asteroid.

    interesting. i did not know all of this.

    but like i said, who's to say it was a asteroid?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Terry D View Post
    Actually not as small as you might think. Only a small percentage of asteroids have had their orbits plotted in enough detail to determine if they are a hazard to Earth. There are literally millions more which could be nudged into an Earth/moon intercept orbit by collisions with other asteroids, or by the gravitational effect of Mars or Jupiter. But a rogue asteroid isn't much of a worry, the chances are small. It's comets that pose a much greater risk. Comets spend most of their time in a literal 'cloud' surrounding the solar system and can drop in on us from any direction, at any time, with very little warning.

    Not that warning would make much of a difference. We don't, currently, have the technology to do anything about such a comet, or asteroid.
    I forget how long ago, but that there was a lot of attention given to the comet as large as a house that was going to be traveling "close" to Earth. Then there was the one only as big as a car that was going to go between the Earth and the moon. In both cases, it was decided that no action was required. What action? Launching an atomic bomb to break it up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by max acorn View Post
    interesting. i did not know all of this.

    but like i said, who's to say it was a asteroid?
    Then what? Alien attack?

    I think I'll just bow out of this one.

    Good luck with this!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jack of all trades View Post
    Then what? Alien attack?

    I think I'll just bow out of this one.

    Good luck with this!
    thanks for the advice.

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