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Thread: Iambic Pentameter - Write Two Lines

  1. #11
    Quote Originally Posted by Darren White View Post


    Freethesea,
    Your second line changed into a cool other meter with a nice musical quality to it: Anapest
    That meter has two syllables in a row without an accent/stress, then followed by one with accent/stress. It swings!
    Thanks Darren White for the encouragement! But I'm thinking of just reading this thread and leaving the poems to the professionals.

    I hope your 'five feet blank verse poem grows into 10' and you're welcome to steal my cool line for a hit song.
    Last edited by Freethesea; August 14th, 2017 at 02:21 PM. Reason: forgot to write my post

  2. #12
    Quote Originally Posted by Darren White View Post


    Me curious, is it "The Ode Less Travelled?" Or a different book?
    Yes, it is "The Ode Less Travelled". I have several other books but I find this one the best for meter
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