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    Dude,what are you talking about?i never gave any names...

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    why is this in NON fiction

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    Quote Originally Posted by albertjacc View Post
    Dude,what are you talking about?i never gave any names...
    I believe he is giving you a sort of expertise in case you attempt to further the story.
    "He slides into second with a stand-up double." - Jerry Coleman
    "Yet today I consider myself the luckiest man on the face of this earth." - Lou Gehrig
    "After Jackie Robinson, the most important black in baseball history is Reggie Jackson." - Reggie Jackson
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    "I think Tim Wakefield would even say tonight that Tim Wakefield got to Tim Wakefield tonight." - Tim McCarver

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    I think you need to tone down on the edginess here. It's just excessive and doesn't add anything to the story.

    Also, why is this in non-fiction?

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    I really did not know that much about stories at the time,as this is one of my first works.I posted it in non-fiction because my grandpa told me about a friend of his from his days back in Russia.It is sort of a true story,although it is just an introduction.Hope you understand me better now.

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