The Second Time Around - Atchafalaya Nightmare


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    The Second Time Around - Atchafalaya Nightmare

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    Last edited by musichal; September 14th, 2016 at 04:57 AM.

    How sweet the moonlight sleeps upon this bank!
    Here will we sit, and let the sounds of music
    Creep into our ears: soft stillness and the night
    Become the touches of sweet harmony.

    - Shakespeare,
    Merchant...Act 5


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    Very nice - I think you made the unusual mix of regular and internal rhyming work.

    My only quibble would be a SPaG one; when one line finishes with a comma I think the next one should really start with a small letter.

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