Quote Originally Posted by eefraoula View Post
I hope it's okay to add this little teensy edit a few weeks late At the end of the first line of dialogue:

"It seems I might have actually hurt..." He bit off what he intended to say as Woert got up and was took several big strides towards them.

I always feel like a piece of dialogue being interrupted reads better when it ends with a dash instead of an ellipsis, especially with your next sentence stating that "He bit off what he intended to say". I think if it was written with a dash, it would deliver the message of being interrupted or biting off his own words:

"It seems I might have actually hurt-" He bit off what he intended to say...

That might just be my personal preference though! I agree that it's definitely useful to see the multitude of ways other people format their writing since there are so many possibilites.

Agree.