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  1. February 25th, 2016, 03:54 PM #1
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    Rhythm of the Schism

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  2. February 25th, 2016, 04:18 PM #2
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    Brilliant! I've always needed a quick method for remembering the order of the planets from the sun. A pedant might remark that Galileo wasn't aware of Pluto but I wouldn't dream of sabotaging your poem that way.

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  3. February 25th, 2016, 04:50 PM #3
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    cheers Jen -

    it's questionable whether Galileo got as far as Neptune - never mind that the pope of that time
    certainly disagreed with his order of the planets! -

    the puple pip challenge gave me the idea - so, I'm glad it came across.
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  4. February 25th, 2016, 09:41 PM #4
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    Fabulous rhythm ned, and I love the rhyme, sounds so smooth and effortless... interesting message...
    She lost herself in the trees,
    among the ever-changing leaves.
    She wept beneath the wild sky
    as stars told stories of ancient times.
    The flowers grew toward her light,
    the river called her name at night.
    She could not live an ordinary life,
    with the mysteries of the universe
    hidden in her eyes....
    Author: Christy Ann Martine

    Death leaves a heartache no one can heal,
    love leaves a memory no one can steal....
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  5. February 27th, 2016, 03:37 PM #5
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