Rhythm of the Schism

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    Rhythm of the Schism

    Last edited by ned; May 14th, 2020 at 05:28 PM.

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    Brilliant! I've always needed a quick method for remembering the order of the planets from the sun. A pedant might remark that Galileo wasn't aware of Pluto but I wouldn't dream of sabotaging your poem that way.

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    cheers Jen -

    it's questionable whether Galileo got as far as Neptune - never mind that the pope of that time
    certainly disagreed with his order of the planets! -

    the puple pip challenge gave me the idea - so, I'm glad it came across.

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    Fabulous rhythm ned, and I love the rhyme, sounds so smooth and effortless... interesting message...
    She lost herself in the trees,
    among the ever-changing leaves.
    She wept beneath the wild sky
    as stars told stories of ancient times.
    The flowers grew toward her light,
    the river called her name at night.
    She could not live an ordinary life,
    with the mysteries of the universe
    hidden in her eyes....
    Author: Christy Ann Martine

    Death leaves a heartache no one can heal,
    love leaves a memory no one can steal....
    Author unknown.

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    sweet man....
    The only one who can heal you is you.


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