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  1. #1


    a manner
    of formalized
    Aim low, hit high. Surprise.

  2. #2
    like the insight and despair.
    a mad form of manner, indeed.

    cheers Ned

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    This rings clear with a simple, yet precise message: Normality is a society-driven approximation.

    Good stuff.
    You may not control all the events that happen to you, but you can decide not to be reduced by them. -Maya Angelou

  4. #4
    So poignant and true.

    Cuts like a knife. Nicely put!

  5. #5
    fantastic piece...has everything I like about poetry....and more
    The only one who can heal you is you.

  6. #6
    Nice and truthful. Thanks.

  7. #7
    This short poem begs for more. What is the consequence of normalized madness? Is there even such a thing as normal? What if the words in the poem revolved like musical chairs:


    a formalized
    of normal

  8. #8
    An interesting thought Tim

    What if in madness, manner was normal. Then normal becomes something really twisted into a kind of madness. Which seems to be Fat's intent.


    a formalized
    as normal

    a poet friend
    RH Peat

  9. #9
    That's what I mean. You could just keep these words rolling around to different positions. They all spin a slightly different light on the original.


    A normalized
    madness of

  10. #10
    I agree with TL and RHPeat--y0u could keep spinning this around --play with them a bit and see if anything tickles your fancy Fat--there is a lot to play with in these few lines

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