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    I been ask to write a non fiction piece, for which I hope I am in the right forum. I've been told I cannot put the right words into every sentence after the first sentence. As you know in the first sentence there is a subject and a predicate. After I pass the first sentence and try to write clear, I cannot because I see no flow in the sentence, after the subject and predicate. I seem to be babbling. I am beginning to doubt if I can grasp general writing. If my thoughts alone are not telling me what words to write, then where are the words coming, except from me?

    I write from my mind heart and experience, please tell me where else I can write from? I am a fanatic for placing the correct subject and predicate in the right place in the sentence as I am fanatic about spelling and editing the piece, "in journalism piece means what's written". Please critique this again? I cannot seem to not find the right forum to write, in just to get it critiqued. I am slow in my mine in trying to understand, new hobbies like writing. I cannot write outside of non-fiction only my thoughts my mind my heart and my experiences. Writer One [-o<

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    Paul in journalism you have to be able to tell a story that explains an event. You need what happened, who was involved, how it effected them. Also a good description of the place, time and surrounding.

    Tell me about the day you got married?

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    I write from my mind heart and experience, please tell me where else I can write from?

    Where did this sentence come from?

    Paul, most of what you write I cannot understand. But I have noticed that occasionally you write, well, a good sentence. It comes out somehow both simple and profound.

    You should try to do more of those. Here's another I remembered:

    My question is if these friends knew about their friend, why didn't they do something to help them with their serious mental problems? I for one have had mental problems since I was sixteen and never killed nothing, but bugs, (I hate them).
    Best wishes. Emma
    English is a good language for people who like to be creative and expressive, not for people who want words to fit into boxes and stay there.

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    For me it's about personal perspectives. Putting into words one's interpretation of events.
    If i post a comment on a "WIP", LOOK! I'm a reader that's all, and i can only tell how i feel, as a READER, giving/offering feedback. Hoping to learn and grow here. So please, tell me where i'm going wrong.

    Me? I'm just a fly on the wall.

    Look! I'm trying, okay?

    One can but dream, if only i had dared.

    "The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is an attribute of the strong" Mahatma Gandhi.
    Alas, i am weak.

    I must find a way to Eastbourne and i so wish that i could dance.


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