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    If you ever want anything critiqued, feel free to message me. I'm one of the best you'll ever find. Though I must warn you, I am very gruff with mine reviews. But just keep in mind that it's all to help--not to bully.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arrakis View Post
    If you ever want anything critiqued, feel free to message me. I'm one of the best you'll ever find. Though I must warn you, I am very gruff with mine reviews. But just keep in mind that it's all to help--not to bully.
    You may want to edit this post for proper grammar then.
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    Quote Originally Posted by velo View Post
    You may want to edit this post for proper grammar then.
    "Mine" was deliberate. That's just how I phrase things.
    "The greatness of evil lies in its awful accuracy.
    Without that deadly talent for being in the right place at the right time, evil must suffer defeat.
    For unlike its opposite, good, evil is allowed no human failings, no miscalculations.
    Evil must be perfect, or depend upon the imperfections of others."

    ~Narrator of The Outer Limits


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    Amazingly written, really! Keep the stories coming in!

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