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    I am ...

    Never mind the simile, no ‘as’, or ‘like’, go for the metaphor, and start with ‘I am ...’ nice and definite.


    Some seem familiar, I can’t directly place them, but I bet someone used them somewhere,
    “I am the quiet voice in the teeth of the storm”
    Some are sympathetic,
    “I am the voice of the lost soul in the deepest dungeon”
    Some are heroic
    “I am the storm wave pouring over ramparts”
    Some are unexplained
    “I am the third shout in the night”

    They stir the emotions and raise the hackles, just what writers need to describe larger than life characters; so what are you?
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    I am the words you never read....
    The only one who can heal you is you.




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    am undecided and non committal, totally on the fence, although i'm struggling with that right now.
    If i post a comment on a "WIP", LOOK! I'm a reader that's all, and i can only tell how i feel, as a READER, giving/offering feedback. Hoping to learn and grow here. So please, tell me where i'm going wrong.

    Me? I'm just a fly on the wall.

    Look! I'm trying, okay?

    One can but dream, if only i had dared.

    "The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is an attribute of the strong" Mahatma Gandhi.
    Alas, i am weak.

    I must find a way to Eastbourne and i so wish that i could dance.

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    I am the old, long, deeply-voiced wind rushing in the night that beckons all to check their underwear.

    How sweet the moonlight sleeps upon this bank!
    Here will we sit, and let the sounds of music
    Creep into our ears: soft stillness and the night
    Become the touches of sweet harmony.

    - Shakespeare,
    Merchant...Act 5


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    I am the one with brilliant words spilling out of her head until she awakes.
    If you talk to a cat they look at you as if you are way below their intelligence to even listen.
    However, when you talk to a dog they look at you with such admiration and really do seem to understand what you are saying.
    Even if it is a bit silly...
    ...they still think you are wonderful.


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    I am the whisper on the wind.

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    I am youth! I am joy!

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    I am Thing One. How do you do?
    Has anyone sighted Thing Two?

    How sweet the moonlight sleeps upon this bank!
    Here will we sit, and let the sounds of music
    Creep into our ears: soft stillness and the night
    Become the touches of sweet harmony.

    - Shakespeare,
    Merchant...Act 5


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    I am the old fart asleep in my comfy chair with a strategically placed snooze paper riffling to my snores.

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