The Ghost (1) (A translated story)

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    The Ghost (1) (A translated story)

    Last edited by xiaoman; October 27th, 2015 at 03:01 PM.

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    Nice work; the translation was a bit awkward in places, but I could still follow the story with no trouble.

    The interactions with the mysterious ghost are well done. I look forward to reading more!

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    I really enjoyed the balance between internal dialog and actual conversation. Also, much of the descriptive writing had a poetic feel which I also enjoyed. As for constructive criticism, I'm sure there's much to say but as a beginner I'll leave that to somebody better qualified for now.
    Keep creating fella.

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    this was nice, it kept my interest. some reason, not sure why, but it had a Chinese vibe to it even though it was translated.

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    Last edited by xiaoman; October 27th, 2015 at 03:03 PM.

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    Last edited by xiaoman; October 27th, 2015 at 03:02 PM.

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    Thank you all! I apologize for removing the post, because I am looking forward to publishing it.


    recently I took part in translating a book written by an American Chinese author Minglu Zeng, and it has come out. All of the stories in this book have received awards and one of them was make a short film:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y4rFGwaJj08


    Here is the introduction of The Wonder of Encounters by Minglu Zeng:

    https://www.amazon.com/Wonder-En ... er+of+Encounters%22




    Kindle: https://www.amazon.com/Wonder-En ... nters%22#nav-subnav



    http://www.dwpcbooks.com/product/html/?84.html

    Thanks for your clicks , best wishes!
    Last edited by xiaoman; August 23rd, 2016 at 03:02 PM.
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    奇遇 The Wonder of Encounters: A collection of short stories By Minglu Zheng

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