Hello Bryan

Nothing wrong with plying somebody with strong drink, or even a little blackmail.

I'm not looking for a 30 page critique of my project including recommendations for revisions and improvements, but it would be nice for a prospective agent to tell me, in a short paragraph or two, why she or he does not think my giving her or him some of my money is a good idea.

All the best with your writing.

Warmest regards
Riis