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  1. #11
    Hi Fru. I'm thrilled that you have more. How much will you have when you are done? I mean, is 9 chapters the end? Just the start?

    Laughing, I too am worried there is too much backstory about you. It's hard to know. Anyway, that's something you can fix later. And it might help for writing the story now.

    I can read more if you want. But I don't know what else I could do know except urge you to finish. What do your other readers say?
    How to write a good start: Hidden Content . Useful, original information. Long and thorough.
    Includes Hidden Content (do you start with description?), Hidden Content (a favorite with publishers apparently), starting with Hidden Content (a lost art), and more.

  2. #12
    I have 4 distinct "parts" I'm gonna write, Chpt 9 is at the beginning of Part 2. It's gonna be long as hell probably, but then as I keep saying this is really only a vanity project for me, shared for anyone who might enjoy a romance story.

    I've given it to two friends to read, they've both been really positive about it, but are obvs not very impartial.
    Check out my piano videos on YouTube! - Hidden Content

  3. #13
    I agree! I vote more too!

  4. #14
    Edit in progress
    Last edited by Fru; May 13th, 2015 at 09:58 AM.
    Check out my piano videos on YouTube! - Hidden Content

  5. #15
    I missed it!
    How to write a good start: Hidden Content . Useful, original information. Long and thorough.
    Includes Hidden Content (do you start with description?), Hidden Content (a favorite with publishers apparently), starting with Hidden Content (a lost art), and more.

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