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    Good work.

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    This reminds me of someone I saw today...she has hazel eyes , nice piece.

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    That's kind of sweet. Why don't you make a picturesque of New Zealand or Australia or Europe?
    Say you're traveling together and enjoying every moment ...

  4. #14
    Really enjoyed reading.

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    Quote Originally Posted by count58 View Post
    That's kind of sweet. Why don't you make a picturesque of New Zealand or Australia or Europe?
    Say you're traveling together and enjoying every moment ...
    Great idea! I may do that. Thank you.
    Boy, your mother really did a number on you, didn't she?

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    I really liked it, the way the description seemed to say she was the only thing you noticed on the beach. I wish you had written more though...

  7. #17
    Enjoyed reading this even if I cannot write romantic fiction.

  8. #18
    I actually love this piece. Very well written, and perfectly discrpted. I smiled a bit after reading. Well done.

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    Wow! Lucky dawg! Thanks for sharing!
    Love description of the the scene and the photo provided.


    BTW

    Think you meant gazed "into".

  10. #20
    I like the prosaic lyric you seem to write. It's subtle and takes readers places. All over your writing I was able to see the color blue, although I'm a bigger fan of the turquise.

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