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    Great work. I liked it a lot.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sarah View Post
    nice man
    i was surfing th web the i found this Meaningful Quotes for you, for motivation and inspiration

    why not post yours here ?
    Thanks, I'll consider it.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kourtney View Post
    Great work. I liked it a lot.
    Appreciate it.

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    great song with a lot of meaning!

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    Loved it. Great feel, although I guess I can't accuratley say that. The emotions were not too strong and yet still meaningful. That helps grab a listener. I could really relate to the dark aspects of love and liked how you presented that in a good and bad light. It was a good song.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Erik Fantasia View Post
    Loved it. Great feel, although I guess I can't accuratley say that. The emotions were not too strong and yet still meaningful. That helps grab a listener. I could really relate to the dark aspects of love and liked how you presented that in a good and bad light. It was a good song.
    Appreciate it. Good that you could see all I was trying to represent in this piece. Sorry for not responding on time as normally, been quite busy, and I actually forgot about this piece. I definitely feel differently about the whole thing now than I did when I wrote this.

    Quote Originally Posted by AnnaLover View Post
    great song with a lot of meaning!
    Glad the passion put into it was not in vain.

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    I am such a music lover and always have been I can not wait to hear this on record I know it going to be great

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    Quote Originally Posted by prncssva View Post
    I am such a music lover and always have been I can not wait to hear this on record I know it going to be great
    Sorry for the super late reply. Glad you liked it, but not sure if or when I'll get this recorded.

    Writing music is a great experience though!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Smith View Post
    First song, pretty short, just the lyrics as I don't have the equipment / programs / know how to perform it, record it and put it on soundcloud or something.

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    I found every thing that I have ever wanted then threw it all away
    Can’t say I even tried, can’t say I ever tried
    Don’t deserve a second chance, sorry it had to turn out this way

    Been two years and you’re still so beautiful, if not more so
    I was just a boy, I promise I’ve changed
    Not sure what my promises mean to you any more
    But I swear you are my world, and I really mean that
    I have never dared lie about that

    I put away those games I played, locked up the masks where my secrets used to lie
    Just one last time
    Let us try
    It cannot be “right love, wrong time” forever
    I know you cannot trust me, but I know we’re complimentary
    So if you’ll let me be me, I am ready

    Because I can’t move on… - softly, repeat x3

    Because I can’t move on!
    (right when I’m about to, you come in and remind me)

    I can’t move on!
    (as if to tell me “soon”)

    Because I can’t move on!
    (as if to tell me “I still love you”)

    Oh I just can’t move on!
    (as if to say to me “please just wait”)

    Not entirely sure why, but I worry that it’s too late

    Nice wordings. It has full of emotion.When I read it, it is as if that I am feeling the heartbreak. By the way, the way it was written is competition calibre. Please do join song writing contests and certainly, you will win. Good luck!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Seth4473 View Post
    I love it!
    Thanks man.

    Quote Originally Posted by bucklethree View Post
    Nice wordings. It has full of emotion.When I read it, it is as if that I am feeling the heartbreak. By the way, the way it was written is competition calibre. Please do join song writing contests and certainly, you will win. Good luck!
    Thank-you so much! Song writing isn't my main focus, but maybe I will still consider entering some contests.
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