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    Revenge (Needs a bridge)

    hi friends I've just write anew lyrics called ''Revenge'' but I couldn't put the right Bridge to it... Anyone can help me about this thanks


    -VERSE 1-
    I didn't really see her face
    So dunno how does she look like
    But should really know her in this case
    If we'd talk 'bout rights what 'bout your lies?
    Yeah yeah


    -HOOK-
    She knew, she was a lady
    In another case she'd agree
    What about me
    I felt the fever while it's 40 degrees


    Did you never make her mind?
    Didn't she remember a night
    What about you baby
    Why you're back to me?


    -CHORUS-
    It's time to talk about revenge
    Never forget it's my revenge
    I admit that I will avenge
    You thought that I forgot it all


    It's time to talk about revenge
    She will ever feel on the edge
    I admit that I will avenge
    She prayed to God so she'll
    Die with you tonight


    -VERSE 2-
    She told She was happy beside you
    While I was lying alone in the bed


    -HOOK-
    I promised I'd show her too
    The tear traces, I cried blood
    My bed's good, it's not wet now
    Dried but still a flood


    -CHORUS-
    It's time to talk about revenge
    Never forget it's my revenge
    I admit that I will avenge
    You thought that I forgot it all


    It's time to talk about revenge
    She will ever feel on the edge
    I admit that I will avenge
    She prayed to God so she'll
    Die with you tonight

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    -VERSE 1-
    I didn't really see her face
    So dunno what does she look like
    But should really know her in this case
    If we'd talk 'bout rights what 'bout your lies?
    Yeah yeah


    -HOOK-
    She knew, she was a lady
    In another case she'd agree
    What about me
    I felt the fever while it's 40 degrees --I like this line


    Did you never make her mind?
    Didn't she remember a night
    What about you baby
    Why you're back to me?


    -CHORUS-
    It's time to talk about revenge
    Never forget it's my revenge
    I admit that I will avenge
    You thought that I forgot it all

    I would not repeat revenge so much I would rewrite that part

    It's time to talk about revenge
    She will ever feel on the edge
    I admit that I will avenge
    She prayed to God so she'll
    Die with you tonight--like this line keep it


    -VERSE 2-
    She told She was happy beside you
    While I was lying alone in the bed


    -HOOK-
    I promised I'd show her too
    The tear traces, I cried blood
    My bed's good, it's not wet now
    Dried but still a flood


    -CHORUS-
    It's time to talk about revenge
    Never forget it's my revenge
    I admit that I will avenge
    You thought that I forgot it all


    It's time to talk about revenge
    She will ever feel on the edge
    I admit that I will avenge
    She prayed to God so she'll
    Die with you tonight

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    Its been too long since I have written a song. Sorry I can't help you with the bridge.

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