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    Just a Memory

    Skies are black and oceans grey,
    (Is the sky breaking again?)
    Somehow I know I've lost my way
    (Is this leading to the end?)
    Open the window; let the clouds pour in
    (Feel the tension rise again)
    No matter what they say,
    I know just where this ends…

    "Are you waiting, for me?
    Is this picture in my mind all I can see?
    Is there something, left to hold?
    Are you there a story just waiting to be told?
    Or just my own sweet memory?"

    Skies turned white, the oceans gone
    (Difficult to see again)
    Blinded by all, what went wrong?
    (I can feel this come to end)
    Look out the window; is the sun still in the sky?
    Or have the clouds rolled in to pass us by,
    Passing me by…

    "Are you waiting, for me?
    Is this picture in my mind all I can see?
    Is there something, left to hold?
    Are you there a story just waiting to be told?
    Or just my own sweet memory?"

    Am I something, feeling nothing?
    Will I scream out to the sky, until my lungs cave in?
    Cry for something, I see nothing
    Just pry open my eyes till the light comes in
    (And I can finally see again)

    "Are you waiting, for me?
    Is this picture in my mind all I can see?
    Is there something, left to hold?
    Are you there a story just waiting to be told?
    Or just my own sweet memory?"

    (It's just my own sweet memory)
    I can see again…






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    It's a simple song that's easy to relate to. The verse that begins with, "Am I something..." had such unique word choices and phrases that it became my favorite verse out of the whole song. Something about your phrasing in that whole verse (possibly bridge from where it's positioned) just stood out as a deeper piece of the song. I like it.

    What sort of music do you imagine going with your lyrics? Any certain genre or similar artists that come to mind?

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    Not really actually, I've been working on recording them to find out what others think because i am just to deep into them to figure it out
    all I know is that out of the blue they come into my head with a melody and demand to be sung






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    Check All of this Hate and City of Stone, they are both recorded and similar in style to this one, both have videos. I was trying to record this one but the dogs were squabbling and then the baby started to cry in the background -_-

    http://www.writingforums.com/lyrics/...-all-hate.html

    http://www.writingforums.com/lyrics/...ity-stone.html






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