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  1. #21
    Kevin---Thank you for reading "Wilson's Grave. Your comments are appreciated . Peace...Jul

  2. #22
    >bump<

    Seriously, I don't know how you tell when you're finished. My husband says writers tinker with stuff till they get tired of tinkering and then call it done.
    Everything you want is just outside your comfort zone.
    — Robert G. Allen

  3. #23
    shades of Poe and I love it. Dealing with secrets is tricky and you have just the perfect balance of suspense, intrigue and horror. well done. This was a difficult story told well.
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  4. #24
    I like that final stanza, Jul, well done!
    There is no life I know
    To compare with pure imagination.
    Living there you’ll be free
    If you truly wish to be.~ Willy Wonka

  5. #25
    astroannie--It is --I think-- finished..

    Ethan--thank you--this is a true story, so that made it just that much more difficult. Thank you for your comments.

    Gumby--thank you ! Hopefully the child will now be the focus of this poem. He is why I wanted to tell this
    story...Peace...Jul

  6. #26
    has some depth to it this piece..enjoyed
    The only one who can heal you is you.




  7. #27
    escorial--Thank you for reading and commenting! Peace...Jul

  8. #28
    Just fantastic. Excellent piece! That last stanza was great
    If your art doesn't push, you won't get any pull.

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