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  1. #11
    A bit too descriptive for me but a good piece nonetheless.

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    way too much description as mentioned before, tone it down. And the opening is all no action. It's just scenery but oh well it's part of your dream right?

  3. #13
    A very pretty piece, it is thought provoking. I've got most of their story line worked out in my head that led them to this moment. LOL


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