First pages - A Pirates Tale (potential novel)


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    First pages - A Pirates Tale (potential novel)

    I am writing a novel for children to young adults and it is quite simply a Pirate adventure and I have removed it for editting or potentially another part as i was getting no feedback.

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    Last edited by surferog; May 24th, 2011 at 02:08 PM.

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    I know it doesnt really give an insight into the novel, but this is the opening couple of pages, any feedback?

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