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violence

  1. petergrimes

    Chapter 5

    Chapter Five. It was then the storm broke. Whatever had held it, snatched the wind away, was gone. As was any peace left upon the planet. The wind roared and trees creaked and branches broke. The snap and crack of backbones, limbs and shattered skulls, the high pitched screams of men sent mad...
  2. L

    The First Law: short excerpt. ACTION SCENE!- warning, a little bloody

    This is a short excerpt from the third chapter of a book I'm writing, so minor spoilers ahead. I've already posted the first two chapters in an earlier thread. They were a horror. Their faces were flushed, and their eyes showed nothing but whites. They ran, crawled and leaped, tripping...
  3. N

    Toxic Masculinity

    I am walking down the street when I feel a few eyes on me. I look sideways and see a few guys gaping at me. Is it my dress? Is it my hair? No. I keep walking, they hoot. They call out a few names and laugh among them. I am uncomfortable now. I walk faster. They follow me. I am scared. Should I...
  4. M

    She Who is About to...

    She Who is About to... By MrBillyD Two High School girls are feuding over a boyfriend, when a certain Vengeance Demon helps them deal with their anger. A comedy with euphemized expletives. (That means dirty words are covered over clumsily, for comic effect.) xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Early on...
  5. M

    E-Mails in a Vampire Town

    E-Mails in a Vampire Town By MrBillyD A high school girl is trying to become a vampire; but she's never had much luck with guys. Not even the un-dead ones. xxxxxxxxx Hello Jake the Vampire: I’m Mallory, the girl who you stood up this past weekend. I am a 16 year old high school girl...
  6. I

    The Unravelling (Extreme violent and sex)

    "Hey Bryan! I gotta go." said Chris as he walked away clutching his backpack. "Later, dude." I replied as I watched him rode away on his bike. Chris and I were both high school juniors. He had been my best friend since 3rd grade. We knew each others secrets. But not this one. No one can...
  7. C

    Intense character paragraph (Mature content)

    Which version do you prefer? I'm leaning to b) but don't want to make the character too unsympathetic. a) For the next half hour he didn't move from his position on the floor. Amid his fixation on White, he envisioned catching his fiancée's killer. He wondered what it would feel like to look...
  8. TheWizard

    The Doctor: Warning, violence and terror await{WIP-Two parts up}

    Welcome, I hope my title has at least somewhat grabbed your attention! I always find titles one of the most important things, so hopefully I gone done good! Anyway! This is an experimental piece I am working on, all in first person from various perspectives and characters. Hopefully it isn't too...
  9. S

    Cobblestone Waterloo (Language)

    THE FOLLOWING IS A CONSIDERABLY SHORT STORY I WORKED ON SOME MONTHS BACK--CURRENTLY AND PERHAPS INFINITELY UNTITLED. FEEDBACK WOULD BE APPRECIATED AND ADORED. THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU. The breeze from the open window carried a nearly angelic scent of magnolia into the room where it...
  10. L

    The Rancor Ch.1 (Graphic Violence) (Language) (Adult Themes)

    how to take down a post? trying to delete
  11. egriffith

    Portraying violence in a novel

    I have a question I'd like to present and get your opinions: How do you describe violence in a story that may appeal to a fairly wide audience? The extremes would be being so graphic that you turn off some of your readers, or being so vague that readers don't get a clear picture of what's...
  12. Glass Pencil

    Triumvirate: Story Pieces and Ideas

    I wrote this draft in 2006 over the course of several hours and haven't really done anything with it since then. The "chapters" become increasingly more contrite as the story goes on and it eventually devolves into a lot of sword fighting and one liners but I think it might have some merit if I...
  13. C

    QUESTION- 1980's, sex, drugs, violence. Would you watch?

    For the past few weeks, I have been in the process of writing a show, or "series." I haven't actually written an episode yet, but I have summarized a few seasons up, and have most of the main characters described. I'm wondering if this idea were to make it big, if anybody would actually watch...
  14. S

    Frankie - 1626 words - Adult subjects and themes

    moving on
  15. Fox80

    Candy Sweet-REVISED-Part 1 of 2 (language, violence, narcotics, prostitution)

    WARNING: Contains violence, foul language, narcotics usage, prostitution. Disturbing. Please do NOT read if you are under 17 or offended by these topics. Here's Candy again - less offensive I hope. If not, it will be pulled again. I think this is about as mild as I can get it. 3246 words...
  16. BluntAshwater

    Bait (working title) Chapter 1

    This is my first post on here, it's the first chapter of the novel I'm currently working on. It's a second draft, although it's still nowhere near as polished as I would like it to be. All constructive criticism appreciated and I shall return the favour :) Dante sprinted down the...
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