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  1. Seedy M.

    coincidences - a pre-script

    This was written for X-files, but Mulder was gone before I submitted it so it's here because I kind of like it. I have changed the names for this to avoid confrontation. Coincidences (As I picture it. I am not a script/screenwriter. It has appeared in a book of shorts and gained quite a lot of...
  2. Glyph

    I'm typing a document (Nameless, Minor Explicit Language*)

    Hi. This is my very first script (well, first one that isn't an assignment from school). I don't really know how to write scripts or what they are supposed to look like, just thought I'd take a shot at it. Please tell me what you think. I imagine this would be more of a film screenplay instead...
  3. S

    The Roommate! (Screenshots of script)

    Tell me if the writing is too small on the pictures! If it is, download the PDF! :grin: Ok, so this is what I got so far. Again, there can only have 2 people, but I'm going to try for 3. If I can't get 3, I'll simply have it so the robber#2 and Derek are the same actor, since they are never on...
  4. M

    L.A's Gutter (Opening) (Language)

    Hi, this is my first ever attempt at a script because I wanted to have a break from just writing novels. So this is an opening to a story I have- yes there probably be quite a lot of mistakes but I would love to write a full script so feedback would be appreciated, thanks. :) L.A’s Gutter...
  5. S

    Talk with the councilor

    What do you think? Any ideas on what I can add/take out? Does it sound natural? I'm no councillor, so i am clueless as to what they would ask a kid. Got any more questions I could get the councillor to ask? ----------------------------- Kid: You called me down? Councillor: Yes, take a seat...
  6. S

    Just One Step (

    EDIT: Sorry about the name, I was going to add warnings, but I didn't find anything regarding a warning for what I have in my script here. But it seems I can't edit my title... So if you're wondering, that's what the bracket is there for. Hey, this is my first monologue. I fixed most of the...
  7. T

    Script Excerpt of 'The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas'

    Hiya! Um, I was just wondering if I could have some advice for the script I'm writing for my Arts Award. I'm a student, and only just starting out with writing, and am especially unsure with adaptations like this. Anything would be welcome, no matter how critical! Props are minimalist, with...
  8. Y

    Help with my course work

    Hi my name’s Yaniv and I’m a student at Rotherham college and I’m studying the course of media and animation and game. One of the course units is writing for the screen where we look at scripts and one of the assignments is to research ideas and then write a script. For my research I need to...
  9. C

    Help for a complete amateur

    I hope I'm posting in the right place. Obviously, I'm very new here so any help will be tremendously appreciated. Some friends and I have been working on a story-driven video game for some time now. The game engine itself is on schedule, but the story hardly a skeleton. I have been tasked...
  10. C

    DUNCAN - A first scene

    This would either be a short film on its own or possibly the first scene to a longer film. Please criticize it beyond recognition, I mean really tear it apart. I'm not sure if its any good so enlighten me on what sucks so I can get better. Rip me a new one on format, pacing, characterization...
  11. J

    Hello fellow new writers

    I am very new to the whole writing industry and very excited about getting involved in the ins and outs of becoming a good writer and getting some feed back on my current works. Great to meet everyone. Please feel free to contact me at any time.
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