Hey Fire, I really liked your poem. The way you juxtaposed two sides of the same coin was effective. The vulnerable nurturer contrasted against the figure
Mickd Today, 03:38 AMWriting any character (for me, anyway) absolutely requires that I can hear them in my inner ear. No matter the gender of the character, clarity of that
Foxee Today, 03:04 AMAs a solo hiker,,I understand this poem
Every ounce of the forest speaks to me in a different way
It fills my soul and it’s the one place
# 18
after snow
Greyson Today, 04:12 AMthe trees all shed
their powdered wigs.