I read a MS that someone had had edited, where every instance of "was" and "the" had been shredded out. It was unreadable.
bdcharles Today, 07:58 PMIn my current work I'm switching POV at each chapter, odd numbered chapters being the MMC and even numbered chapters the FMC POV. Even though it's consistent,
indianroads Today, 07:53 PMWe're entering the realm of Head Hopping here (and as mentioned in the other thread, I've split the discussion to keep each thread on topic).
Head Hopping
I'm reading the Edge of Collapse series by Kyla Stone. Each chapter uses the POV char's name as the title. She might run three or four chapters with the
Foxee Today, 08:31 PM