Stuub what a compliment. Truly grateful And what a way to critique! Take it straight to the heart. Yes I agree with you, like with most things I was too
Thanks for your comment! Looking back at it now I'm not sure the piece is finished so you are very free to suggest any improvements. Totally forgot about
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Tyrant
One thing that causes me an issue, is all of the punctuation... you might think about, or play around with line breaks, in poetry line breaks are used
Firemajic Today, 01:23 PM