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    Olly Buckle

    Five and ten cent store

    'Ballooning' hardly strikes me as a ten cent word, not even all that extraordinary. I wonder what he would have made of it if you had had the clouds 'Sweeping

    Olly Buckle Today, 11:22 AM Go to last post
    Phil Istine

    Five and ten cent store

    Clouds "ballooning" sounds good to me, especially if it fits with a ten-cent word character in the story and also fits with the imagery you

    Phil Istine Today, 10:57 AM Go to last post
    dither

    Progress...

    Gofa,
    I would LOVE to show a before pic because I'm stumped and y'know what?
    The only screwing involved maybe my having screwed myself.

    dither Today, 10:42 AM Go to last post
    bdcharles

    Five and ten cent store

    Good point. I like a good ten-cent word. I had a crit recently on another forum where I had the sentence, regarding some clouds "ballooning in from

    bdcharles Today, 10:27 AM Go to last post
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