My characters tend to be introspective, and so the word 'would' sometimes infests my writing and is whittled down during edits.
What would
Try to incorporate aspects of the character's personality. If they're humorous, intelligent, serious, scared, etc , add something into their speech. Have
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Keeping Plot and Character Elements Organized in Long Works
I keep a separate document where I place the main occurrences in each chapter. As well I record the changes to each character and indicate the chapter
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